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Drabble * [Jun. 18th, 2006|08:00 am]
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Another OT3 of mine. 

TITLE: Obedience 
PAIRING: Greed!Ling/Ed/Ran Fan
WARNING: Non Con- Not Beta'd

“Ran Fan, don’t do it.”


He had tried reasoning, tried yelling, and now he had resorted to begging. Edward could feel his pride slowly dissipating as time went on, but in his current situation, pride was second to last thing on his mind. 


The Xingian girl paused and hesitated when he said it. She wore a look of uncertainty and worry unsure if she should obey the boy under her, or on top. Greed bent down and whispered something in her ear while nibbling the lobe that helped her make up her mind, Ed assumed, for she went on doing exactly what he had been trying to prevent.


“I’m sorry,” She said, grabbing Edward’s exposed and wet cock with soft fingers, and guided it inside her.


She hissed, Edward gritted his teeth and looked away. Greed had a look of lust and excitement. He rubbed Ran Fan’s back reassuringly and said, “Good job.”


Ed turned to glare at him, the rope that bound his wrist to the bed rubbed at his already raw skin, but he ignored it as he saw that Ran Fan was doing the same, her eyes red as she whispered, “Young Master…” Greed crushed his mouth on her as his body jerked, hers jerked with his, making Edward’s do the same.


He heard Greed moan above him and say, “You know Edward you can learn a thing or two about obedience from Ran Fan here.” His body jerked again, and it caused Edward to move around in Ran Fan once more.


“Fuck!” The blond hissed at sudden movement and gritted his teeth listening to Greed’s howl of laughter that had followed.


[User Picture]From: train_diskense
2006-06-19 11:18 am (UTC)
One word :Hot.

I love you. Seriously. *glomps and purrs*
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-06-20 12:39 pm (UTC)
And I love you and your awesome (always make me feel loved) comments. *Pets*
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[User Picture]From: tir_synni
2006-06-19 05:08 pm (UTC)
*mewls* Poor Ed. Poor Ran. But I competely adore the fact that you got her in there and you had the whole obedience factor. It was a little painful to read but definite points for the Ran!love.
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-06-20 12:38 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry it hurt you :( But thank you for the comment anyways. :D
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[User Picture]From: velvet_mace
2006-06-19 06:44 pm (UTC)
Ah man Greed!Ling has so much potential to be very very bad.
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-06-20 12:37 pm (UTC)
And that is so very very good. :3
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[User Picture]From: eli_artemisia
2007-11-03 07:16 pm (UTC)
NICE!!! *_* This totally just made my day. Demented, Sexy, and I worship Greed!Ling for enforcing Ed/Ran Fan.

Huh...I didn't know I had the capacity to like non-con. Just goes to show there's an exception to just about everything.

Much Love,
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