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The Third Theme... is short! XD [Mar. 21st, 2006|12:47 pm]
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Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Title: Author/Artist: alchemistx
Theme: #29. I will never hurt you...
Pairing/Characters: Ed/Ling
Summary: Because, at the time… he believed it.

For 30_nights

“I will never hurt you,” Ling breathed while looking lovingly at the small lump of bones and blonde hair that lay motionless beside him on the dingy hotel bed.

The lump laughed in response, and turned its head just a little, so yellow eyes met black. “Really?” Edward questioned, “Remember how we met?” A mischievous smirk played on his good features, when the alchemist saw the Prince pout.

“That doesn’t count,” Ling stated. “We were not lovers then. I hardly knew you…”

“You also hardly knew me the first time we screwed,” Ed pointed out.

Ling looked at him for a moment and then a soft chuckle left his own lips. “You make a valid point, Edward,” he said, leaning forward and placing a chaste kiss on Ed’s forehead. Then, moving his lips close to Edward’s ear, his breath tickling a few stray strands of blonde hair, “But that was then, this is now, Edward. I would never hurt you, not now… Not ever.”

Ed sighed, “Yeah, yeah…” Ling began to stroke the skin next to the automail ports, and Edward allowed it to lure him into a secure kind of sleep. The Prince’s promise safely stashed away to the back of his mind.

Because, at the time… he believed it. 


Short and... well, not sweet but whateva! XD


[User Picture]From: questofdreams
2006-03-21 07:05 pm (UTC)
awwwww!! Do you realize that you're an inspiration to my own lingxed ficlets? hehe. well, you are. I loved this. So sweet ^__^

And yay, masterlist! haha..*goes to pilfer*
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-03-21 07:08 pm (UTC)
:D Really? Oh well your to kind! I love your Ling/Ed fics to, so keep them up and i'll keep mine up! XD
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[User Picture]From: chrstphrl
2006-03-21 07:19 pm (UTC)
This is sweet and just a bit sad. Wonderful job.
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-03-21 10:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the wonderful comment! =D
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[User Picture]From: evilnflightless
2006-03-21 08:15 pm (UTC)
Awwwww:sigh: <3

Thankyou for my daily doses of Ling/Ed... :bows: You rock my socks!

I noticed you have some previouse fics I havent seen.... I shall joyfully go off and read them as well :D
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-03-21 10:02 pm (UTC)
Your very welcome for the Ling/Ed we definetly need more! XD
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[User Picture]From: penguin88
2006-03-21 08:51 pm (UTC)
Ouch... That was nicely written and definitely packed a neat little punch at the end. I have such mixed feelings (read: angst) about the whole Ling/Greed thing, so it is nice to see the prelude to that era. I love the way that you write angst that looks fluffy on top (sense? where are you sense?). So, nicely done once again.
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[User Picture]From: alchemistx
2006-03-21 10:03 pm (UTC)
XD yeah, sugar coated angst seems to be my forte.

Thanks for the comment :D
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[User Picture]From: animethief92
2006-03-25 04:39 am (UTC)
Very sweet drabble, but I'm curious to know if there's a title?

Can't wait to read some more of your Ling/Ed fics since you always seem to be able to make them fit Ling & Ed's personalities so perfectly. Especially as lovers.
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